I offer Business Solutions

What does that tell you? Not much!

You're either: 
screaming at your screen - "just tell me what you actually do!!"
or
you've switched off and moved on...

and if you use the word "solutions" that's exactly how your reader is reacting

Act NOW

Scan all your copywriting - website, brochure, leaflets, everything

Be precise in your wording to make it easy for your reader understand how you can help them.

End of rant.